Board Thread:Questions and Answers/@comment-44915934-20200204143658/@comment-44915934-20200224134107

Fluid-decanter wrote: Hey Nimlasher, thanks for sharing your work with us again. I'd encourage you to stick to this one thread in future, so people can more easily follow it. You can edit your initial post to update it in addition to posting about new developments.

A Loving Experiment - Enjoyed the new content. I would pick a nit about canon that there's no precedent for TLS characters using "gods" as a swear, as the setting is short on polytheistic faiths, and Robin in particular is known to use "Goddess" when she swears at all. Also in "The moaning now turning into a whimpering exaltation of pleasured pants" "turning" seems like it should be "turned", or maybe this fragment should be merged with the sentence before it.

Research Assistance - The additions work well, I feel. I'm glad the eyes motif didn't disappear when the sex part started.

A Much Needed Break - Good new fic, and it seems Wynn isn't the only one who can get her brains fucked in, haha. Some points: "her and her father" should be "she and her father". "plumed her depths" should be "plumbed her depths". Robin never says "yeah", always "yes". "driving her further up the wall in her own ecstasy" is odd because I had understood them to be doing it on the table; if this is figurative, then this seems to incorrectly imply she is annoyed.

If you or other writers are looking for scenarios the game doesn't cover but aren't a huge departure from canon, I have a few thoughts; maybe one will inspire?
 * Canonically, Robin claims not to have masturbated thinking of her father (at least up to the point in Chapter 3 when she tells him she plans to start). Suppose she didn't stick to that rule very well? She's been attracted to him for a long time and has surely overheard or seen more than just the one incident in Devil's Pass.
 * Some fans have noted that there is almost no content with more than one male participating, even though Word of SL says Simon's done it at times, mostly with Wendis. A slight divergence from canon could, for example, result in a Simon/Yarra/Orcent threesome in that part of the Erosian prelude just before meeting Ulrissa for the first time.
 * Similarly, we haven't had a proper Simon/Wendis/Wynn scene, but we know it happened. Simon mentions the setup for one: "Wynn, do you remember the forest pool?"
 * Janine says she's not very interested in women, but that hasn't stopped a few scenes with Carina from happening, and she had to figure it out somehow. Perhaps Janine experimented a bit?
 * Trin has probably been allowed to use her powers for pleasure with someone besides Altina. There's also a lot of her character arc left implicit between her introduction and the development implied by her max affection scene.
 * Yarra's been sent to seduce Simon's enemies a few times, such as toward the end of the battle for Yhilin.
 * Some amount of time - and sex - is left implicit during the part when Simon is in the Orgasmic Empire. Such a fic would allow the writer to theorize about Imperial culture - and sex. Alternately, the writer could explore Simon's training, whether by Nalili, Esthera, or the brothel girls. Alternately, what if Simon really did run off with that maid, and what if the maid didn't mean to let that happen?

Those are just sexual ideas, but I should also point out that most people aren't playing TLS just for the sexual content - if you have ideas for fics that aren't strictly sexual, I'm sure those would find an audience as well. Thank you very much for you response. I'll see what I can do about those edits you mentioned above. And I'll make sure to post to this thread for updates on content.

As for your suggestions about content, I very much appreciate that. I'm currently doing a fresh game to better get the lore for a story I'm working on but things are going slowly due to real life stuff going on at the moment. I think you all will enjoy it. I won't go too much into detail about the content of it, but it's going to be a mixture of both sexual content and "slice of life" day to day stuff from an unexpected persepective. As for Trin, I'm hesitant to write scenes for her involving the others without Simon since she seems pretty Dubcon in her approach, but I have something in the works for her at the moment involving a few different partners.

I'm so glad that you enjoyed what I wrote along with the edits and extensions I added. It's very much appreciated, thank you.