Board Thread:The Last Sovereign Discussion/@comment-31763506-20170717113624/@comment-27713488-20170721091738

Well, nice work getting that all down.

Haven't gone over your reasoning in detail, but I do wonder why you feel Hilstara couldn't have served in the army before turning 18. Also you should have an actual link to "DukeLeto7's conversation with SierraLee in the community section of the Patreon page"

The TOC should probably be general eras, not having actual headings for smaller time ranges with few significant line items. I don't have a specific idea beyond that.

Also not sure "of The Last Sovereign" is a necessary part of the title. I mean, we don't have pages called "Countries of The Last Sovereign" or "Characters of the Last Sovereign".