Thread:2A01:E35:2E80:4E90:D051:3184:C25A:3D4D/@comment-27713488-20170730224146/@comment-2A01:E35:2E80:4E90:D051:3184:C25A:3D4D-20170731101918

Hi,

I understand your concern about the changes. But I didn't make many changes, and sometimes I added more details to the guide.

My opinion is that this guide - as many other pages in this wiki - contains too much speeches. People come here because they're looking for specific informations: - where I have this point - when I have this point - what I have to do to obtain this point

No need to use complexe phrasing, when the people already played the game, because they know the story. I don't say this game is easy but the phrasing could be much simplier. Exemple of what I modified: * If Arcane/Sexual Agreement was funded, Janine says "We had an encouraging amount of cooperation..."'' gives +1. Otherwise, no changes.'' --> * If Magic Standardization was funded, +1 Yhilin Coup ("Mages across the country have been working in a coordinated fashion to help..."). We don't have to specify what happens if the player don't have the bonus, except the penalties. But we have to specify everytime what bonus is given to be sure there is no misunderstanding (and to help the search).

In the same vein, I rework the tables in order that the main variable targeted by the player's decision appear in a dedicated column.

Finally, I regret the lack of consistency between the pages, and sometimes in the same page. Take a look on characters' pages: same actions are described differently. Names are also different: Border is OK or Border is average?, Battle Progress or Battle Score?

I don't critize the work that has been done, but I really think this wiki can be improved. Last but not least, I'm not fluent in english so long conversations is not my cup of tea.