Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-27886747-20160611191524/@comment-27886747-20160613075334

Lostone2 wrote: I will suggest that the following parts: Final preparations and Facing the Mastermind will be moved to the Walkthrough page instead.

I don't agree. The warnings that now constitute most of the Janine's Retreat section should be in the battle article anyway, and the only thing left to add in that section is the introduction to the military/chaos/collateral system which is also something inseparable from the battle. As for the Hidden Stronghold, if it's on another page, anyone following this one will have to go to the other page and then have to return back to this one, which is even worse ergonomically than collapsible sections. :) I would agree that advice for beating the Unhumans should go to the Bosses article, though.

For the rest, I'm not entirely sold in one big table for the three factors. Have you consider to split it in three?

FluidDecanter's RP guide listed them by category, and it was difficult to compare who gets what, so I made the table. They can also be listed in another form somewhere else on the page, such as in the result list, and at the appropriate places in the cutscenes and conversations with allies.

IMHO, it fits to add to this page the variations in Janine's speeches after the battle (at least those that indicates the best outcomes). They could be added as text or as images like in the Chapter 2 travel timer page.

The empty lists in the Aftermath section are placeholders for the variations in the text, with warning when exactly they appear - I was going to do some copy-paste from FluidDecanter's list. I think that using images would be overkill, and it will take a lot of place, since there are quite a lot more variations than with the travel timer.