Board Thread:The Last Sovereign Discussion/@comment-29984007-20171225123249/@comment-29984007-20180109074925

Lostone2 wrote: I hadn't finished playing with it but so far I have a couple of suggestions and some grammar typos.

Suggestions:


 * It's just a minor thing but I would change the order of Simon's stats: Economy, Social and Religion.

Some typos:


 * Mercanary flotilla-> Mercenary flotilla.


 * Deed of Vinarion -> Deeds of Vinario.


 * Elven Ghetto Improvment-> Elven Ghetto Improvement.


 * Head of House Telon Status -> Head of House Thelon Status.


 * Estruin Impact Score -> Eustrin Impact Score.


 * Charater Speech Bonus -> Character Speech Bonus.


 * Send the Orc Straight North -> Sends the Orcs straight north.


 * Send the Orc though the mountain -> Send the Orcs through the mountains.


 * With shouldn't been capitalized when is in the middle of a phrase: Talk With-> Talk with, etc... As it happens in Spanish too, only the proper nouns should be capitalized, not the common nouns.


 * The options for the middle chest in the Tower of Mist sound a bit weird, maybe Opened/Ignored would work best.

tnx for the typos, rearrange the simon secret stats and repharsed the tower of the mist chest option.

Lostone2 wrote:

Yeah that works. Hey Fulminato, do you think that you could add a note reflecting that. Just in case that your tool is shared outside of the wiki...

you think is bettere in the html page o write a readme file?